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Gary Barwin's avatar

Oh I love this poem. I wrote a response and a very short commentary on Evan's poem here: https://garybarwin.substack.com/p/neon-pajamas-justice-and-the-pig

Nichola Napora's avatar

Swimming full speed, i keep my hearts in a cooler. All three of them, in the deep water dark. I shift while shaping, the ground of shadows and grain. I become my surroundings, at least that is what I let you see.

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