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Michael Pershan's avatar

Good poems sound like this: bum bum bum bum bum BUMMAH bum bum BUMMAH bum bum bum bum bum BUMMAH bum bum BUMMAH BUMMAH bum, so write a poem that sounds like that, like an arrhythmic jackrabbit heartbeat, like a tot on a trike toppling down a sand dune, like the sequence of primes, like miscalculated gemmatria, like a crack squad of chariots pulled by three-legged horses, like Jack White’s Jazz Orchestra, like the girl you had a crush on who died of death, like farting into the whirlwind, like dunking on yourself (and then you cry), like brain on fire brain on fire brain on fire that’s good and now relaaaaaaaaaaaax, like holy shit man did you see the revenant?, like “thesaurus” is another word for “treasury,” now take out your decoder ring and follow the steps, once more with feeling, bum bum bum BUMMAH bum bum BUMMAH bum bum yeah, write a poem exactly like that if you like.

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Write a poem where the poet forgets. Perhaps it is a peaceful undergoing, like honey pools within the honeycomb; or perhaps the body and the mind are all gone. Write as if every thought has become unaligned with its ghosts. Placed within a human night and within the avenues of this cloister is an orchard of black and fuzzy pears. Let no one walk among the trees. Yet who picks the pear and knows the taste? Let the laughter that rifles into the air become the poem’s refrain. Become unaligned and drunk, like wine and milk. Then forget the fuzzy pears. Forget the honeycombs and the ghosts and other tantrums of wings without a sky.

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